The sun creeping through the leafless trees resembling dark shadowy hands across a freshly plowed field. The frost gleaming, sparkling, changing with the movement of its light giver. The fog rises calmly, thickens then dissipates. I see deer. I see life!
You stated that educated people do not rudely point out other peoples' ethnic backgrounds or level of education, which is, if not false, misguided. I see it all the time. He obviously sees you have a different view, by his notice of the sticker. That doesn't take an education, just awareness. These viewpoints that are protected by the constitution, are a political farce. Express that view point to the wrong person or governmental entity and see how protected your words and views become. I do agree that we are all racist and it is up to the individual to overcome those preferences. I love what you have written and enjoyed the read.
God, I hope this is "just a story". Your a good story teller. I could definitely put myself into the story. Very vivid. Not the vomit. People will put anything on facebook. The humor is believable. I could see this actually happening, which leads me again to say,"God I hope this is just a story". Is LOL appropriate?
I really like this, but one thing bothers me. When the prompt asks for truck, STEAL and hair, does it mean the words themselves or an allusion to. If it meant to use those words, I don't find the word steal in the story. Doesn't harm the story, but I'm a stickler for rules. Great story! Thanks for letting me read.
The story of the slenderman has been around for awhile. Its allure has even caused two girls to violently stab a friend of theirs. This was on the evening news in Alaska. This is a good installment. I like the darker side of literature, but my mind can't find this type of fiction. Keep it coming.
Do not leave me hanging like that. This is cool. Aphon X, I think is sufficient, but I didn't write it. I can honestly place myself in the position of Ritchie and the frustration felt. You have caused me to really want that phone to ring again. Definitely keep it up. Thank you for letting us read.
"This is actually good", said the man, knowing he really knew nothing of poetry. I know what I like. The subject is a personal favorite of mine. The wind as a living being or as a harbinger of events to come, chilling, at least to me.
Just a bunch of random thoughts and events, an every day experience for a guy like myself. Very hard to follow and would probably be a little confusing to some. Breathe or don't breathe, to me at least is a little inspired. Will is sometimes all there is, profound. This is less a review than an "atta boy". Thank you for letting us read.
This is a chilly little story. I never really feared death until I got older. One by one my friends all died. stuff like that makes you think. I love the concept.
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