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Review by Eldee
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
I can't wait to see this continued!
Your flow was a little off some places, but I credit that more to your characterization then the writing. It would have been less broken up, however, if you had used "I" less to begin your sentences. In the amount written, however, your characterization was done wonderfully!
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