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Review of Broken Warrior  
Review by Emberfall/Cora
Rated: E | (4.0)
Loved the story! It had a great plot. I would suggest adding a little more detail. You know, describing the setting some more and how each cat looks in depth when you first introduce them into the story. Other than that, the dialogue was interesting, the plot gripping, and the ending emotional and wonderful. It ties into the books almost as if it actually happened. I really loved it! Keep on writing, you have a lot of potential! Just a few adjustments needed here and there.
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