I absolutely adore this poem. The format is great, and the flow is easy. It doesn't seem rushed at all, very easygoing and honest. It's very optimistic and still very powerful -- something I personally struggle with in writing -- so kudos for that! Keep up the great work :)
This is informative and sad at the same time. It highlights how many children feel when being picked on by their peers, and really shows how children can relate to most anything to help themselves escape.
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