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Review by Ethereum
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Pretty interesting story. I think it does an interesting job of covering what needed to be covered to give the characters a personality, and I find it interesting how the setting was so simple and despite there being no connection to the characters, you can feel the man's sadness with Brad leaving the service. Overall really well done, and I think you did a great job.
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Review by Ethereum
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Well made, interesting, and cryptic. It does a good job of conveying the emotions of the lady and how exactly she was feeling. The voice seems to guide her, and it turns out that it is her unborn child, and the story generally does a good job of throwing the reader into a strange world with little idea whats happening.
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