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Review by Eva Duarte
Rated: E | (4.0)
The first part is the perfect way to explain why the feeling of love fades.

but... "Love never fades"
really nice.
And it's a softer piece, good way to put you're lighter feelings. Not that a acking heart it's light.

Eva.
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Review of ARREST ME!  
Review by Eva Duarte
Rated: E | (4.5)
I can't help to be amused by your writing.
Your dark humor really gets to me, I must say.
You think of stuff that the best I can do to feedback it, it's to blink!
I enjoyed this piece so much, your style is so natural and simple and even so you have to re-read some sentences because they are so... so! I read and re-read them just to feel it again. And I never get the same feeling twice, it metamorphoses. I like it.

I would arrest you, in the end of the piece!

Eva.
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Review of Sunset  
Review by Eva Duarte
Rated: E | (3.5)
You have a very deep description of the environment surrounding, wich alows the reader to feel a part of it and also to get sensitive and caring about what will happen. You have to be carefull and not be too extensive, though.
I was deeply captivated by a line of thought that you made:
"Change is the worst enemy of happiness and time is the greatest cure for pain. It's a shame that life is short and full of change."
I think it's really beautiful and makes you think.

You're in a very good way, it's a really nice piece of heart you have here.

Eva.
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