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Review of Go to Bed!  
Review by Abigail Carroll
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's cute. It sounds like what my sister (and I) used to to do. She still puts up a fight. i just except it and turn on my radio and open a book and read till I get sleepy. I wish I could save this poem somewhere. then read it to ym little ones.
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Review by Abigail Carroll
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I loved your work. I've never been a fan of Valentine's Day myself since my first boyfriend broke up with me on that day on account of what he called a change of heart. I always thought it was all pointless anyway. Technically since we were forced to make the whole class valentine's day cards. I may have been all like "Valentine Day=Candy!" when i was super little. I have no memory of being like that. Other than being excited about Dad and Mom giving my sis and I a little bear and dinner at the Mexican Restaurant on Valentine's Day. There I go. i cannot shut up sometimes. I really do wish there was more of this story. It's wonderful. It vaugly reminds me of James Patterson's more adult works (like the Women's Mystery Club). Keep writing!
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Review of He Stuck Around  
Review by Abigail Carroll
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's a great poem. It reminds me of a relationship between two of my friends. He has to take pills to keep from going crazy. it's what his mother did beside him when he was a small child, i think. or part of it. I don't like to get into the "gossip" part of someone's life. She keeps him happy and they really get along. I think she helps his dad's girlfriends son to I've noticed. We're all one happy bunch of social outcasts holding fort in the middle school cat 5 hurricane. Keep writing!
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