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Review by sarcasmpucktail
Rated: E | (4.5)
Wow....i never thought that so much could be said about chocolate

I loved the extended metaphor of this chocolate to what happens when you finally get something you want and it's not everything that you'd expected it to be, well at least that's what I got out of it, I'm not sure if that was the message you were trying for.

Excellent no matter what
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