Awwww this is such as sweet poem. It really shows the love you have for your cats.
You should have a better title for this to show what this poem is about. Maybe something like "My buried cats" The discription shouldnt say a poem of mine because it doesnt tell the reader whats its about or catch the readers attention. Say something like "a poem about my buried cats." These two things are really important to be a sucessful writer on this site. Keep writhing! Youre doing great.
I love the meaning of this poem. When I think about it, I know that that happens in countries across the word.
The title is very suitable for the poem. It tells the reader about what this poem is about but it also makes them couriouse about how it is written.
I love the way you put everyhing together and it makes it fun to read. Keep writhing, you're doing an amazing job! :)
This is a very nice poem! Now I really want to read the short story that you are writhing! i like how you ended the poem with a question because it makes the reader think about what hey just read. It also makes the poem a little interative because the reader would have to answer it! Great job! Keep writhing! :)
This is a perfect poem! I really liked it because it reminded me of the greek labyrinth, where if you go in you would never come out! I've read many stories about it and I was couriouse about how the poem would turn out! This is nicely done! :)
This was interesting to read because nobody that I know of wrote about a topic like this! I found it funny because Im looking at it from a girls propective and Im like "Wow, is this what guys think?" But I still enjoyed reading it because it wasnt like anything that've read before. I would also call this a comedy! Keep writhing! :)
This is a creapy poem, and it's one of the things that I love about it! I also love the theme! Keep writing!
I would like to see some of your new work after you finish writing.
When I was reading this I was like, "Awww, that's the sweetest thing I ever read!" I really liked the rhyming in this, it was done in a very creative way. I also liked the dove idea in this poem. Its funny because used a dove analogy in my poem called "The definition of love" So this brough a new propective of a dove for me. (You should read that poem and review it, I think you'll like it, because it has a simillar theme to it") Keep writiting, I am looking foward for some of your new work.
I've learned a little from this so it'll help me with the futur poems that I write.
This was very interesting to read from the beginning to the end. I love it when the story starts off with someone about to die because it makes me wonder why. I will tell my friends to read this because it was very well done. Keep on writing! You're doing an excellent job.
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