The article is great, keep up. The persona has a heavy heart. They are sad about what they have lost. They are taken aback by the phoenix, embers reigniting along long feather. The theme of the content is cool, though some sadness and regrets are shown. Good work, write on
The author shows that not only desire can construe development, but prideful quality and visceral depths. The validy states that it relies on freedom which cannot exist. The article is informative and shows good information on different emotions. Write on.
The theme when Christ was born must have been quite and calm. Christ is born to save sins and still rose from the dead. It shows that Saviour came to save our sins . He later rose from the dead and by his grace we live. Very encouraging piece. Write on.
First of all, the author is so much aware of what they are talking about. This topic, Religion, is so much sensitive in our society today. Offering of title is so such misunderstood and people take this as if preachers like taking things without working for them. It is good that tithe is today voluntary and no one forces you to pay for it. Good content.
The author has an interesting theme of love. Romeo and Juliet are lovers and love each other deeply.
It is seen that both are interested in love and commitment to one another. Great content, write on. love is one of the most interesting topics I know.
I personally find this poem interesting since the author is trying to figure out what they can do in 5 minutes. I like the fact that the author has it that the first thing they would do with the 5 minutes is write poems before anything else. Personally, there are many things I could do with 5 minutes provided. First of all, I would figure out my goals and come up with a plan on how I would achieve them. It is a nice piece, write on.
The article shows that at the beginning it might seem as if things are working well but then after sometime it turns to be destructive. It therefore forces people to take more caution that's why the old are encouraged to stay indoors. Quite informative article, write on.
The person is in pain. They seem to be treated differently by the other character despite treating them well. The writer is really informative and educative. The persona was mistreated and never appreciated. But then the other character denies their wrong doings leaving the persona upset. The writer shows self awareness in that even though the persona is hurt, they are not demoralized but instead accept the situation and move on. The writer should improve on showing the feelings of the other characters regarding the theme. The topic ' Give me a sign" fits well with the content since the persona would like to understand why the other character is acting contrary to what they had done to them. The content is recommendable and encouraging. However, the writer need to show us more on different feelings and reactions regarding what is being said in the whole content.
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