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Review of Euphoria  
Review by KawaiiBoo
Rated: E | (5.0)
A1 since day one.
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Review of Yellow Starbursts  
Review by KawaiiBoo
Rated: E | (4.5)
Add "that" after Starbursts on the first line.
expect -> expected third line

Other than that the masterpiece is a wonderful, marvelous, and brilliant piece of work! I also like the emphasis with the caps.
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