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Review of Roger Bacon  
Review by Phean Lane
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi,

A nice story giving the feel of the narration of probably the first woman to have ventured out to know and operate a radio in her hands, compromising for it her freedom and name and even agreeing to solitary existence.

Best wishes,

Phean Lane
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Review by Phean Lane
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hi,

A nicely written satire on the plight of Santa Claus and the Snow Men.
It is in fact a story of anger being deliberately misdirected and vented on the character for which Santa Claus and the Snowmen were known all over the world.
It was an attempt to change them using even force, which as the story tells us, was exacerbated more by the tolerance shown by Santa Claus and the snow men. They were attempted to be replaced by others who had an eye on their work.
It was to destroy the art and skill of toy making.
It was an attempt to make them suspects of any wrongdoing of any kind anywhere at slightest of thoughts.
They acts were ultimately dubbed illegal and were labelled as the cause of all disturbances and in the end had their names attached with crimes of all kinds.

A tribute to the innocents,

Best Wishes,

Phean Lane
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Review by Phean Lane
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi,

An interesting description of core of business conversation taking place between two persons , in the future times with plans to set up factories in space and also to invest in them.

A litle description of the settings of the conversation would have added more ambience effect. As you know Space and Time (age included) are the two most important features of a Sci-Fi story.

An interesting bit all the same and a good attempt.

Best wishes,

Phean Lane
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