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Review by freyawastaken
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I really loved this. As less-than-great poetry reader, I don't feel that I know enough to offer you much advice. Even if I did, however, I don't know what I'd say: I honestly cannot think of a way this could be better. Great job.
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Review by freyawastaken
Rated: E | (4.5)
Melted crayons... beautiful, truly beautiful. Although shouldn't it be 'molten'? I might be wrong. I thought 'melted' was a verb, and 'molten' was the adjective. Anywho. This is so vivid - with stunning descriptions, it's an incredibly visual, colourful piece of writing and truly inspirational. It left me feeling very peaceful and content. My one criticism is that perhaps it drags on a little and deviates from the purpose of the piece. Still, it does so in a very pleasant way, and I was willing to read it all the way through - consistency is another thing I must compliment you on. I honestly can't think of any major complaints for this work: all I have to say is, thank you and keep writing.
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