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Review by fringeaddict
Rated: E | (4.5)
that was really good. i had the same family my mom died and i dont live with my dad and i know how the boy trevor feels and he has courage to stand up to his dad and that is a great charatizic to have even if it just a character in a story that is what makes someone themself and not others. keep up the good work on the writing. if writiing make you feel happy then keep writing dont let poeple bring you done so keep up the awesome job. and have a wounderful day.
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Review of Desire  
Review by fringeaddict
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
i liked the poem it is exactly how most people feel so keep up the good i believe yoiu have a talent in writing poems.
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Review of Permeation  
Review by fringeaddict
Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
i believe it could be a little bit better but good job on the plot and things. i really related to it. you made me believe i was there which is a really good thing. i love storys that makes me feel like i am there or that person it was really cool. keep up the awesome job.
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Review of Help Us Help YOU!  
Review by fringeaddict
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
this is an awesome way for other people to find out more about writing.com. infact one of my freinds told me about it and i have been telling my friend. i advice everyone who has freinds who love to write and/or read join us because it is a great way to get help and advice on your writing skills.i have had a lot of good people help me and gave me advice on my peoms and storys so make sure you tell those people who love to write to join us.
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Review of Can you Hear Me?  
Review by fringeaddict
Rated: E | (4.0)
that was really good i liked the ending that was pretty funny because she had nothing left to say that was really good keep up the good work
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Review of I Am  
Review by fringeaddict
Rated: E | (3.0)
that was kinda good but you could do better i believe you have talent a very good talent. i believe you can help the world with your writing if you keep practicing trust me every one practice even i do.so keep up the good work.
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Review of In My Attic  
Review by fringeaddict
Rated: E | (5.0)
wow that was very touching i felt the emotion while i was reading it. that was a awesome job you did
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Review of Today I Cried  
Review by fringeaddict
Rated: E | (5.0)
that was a good poem. i even felt the emotion behind it. keep up the good work.
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Review of Losing September  
Review by fringeaddict
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
I Know how it feels to loss some one you love and care so much about. anyways good job on writing the poem
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Review by fringeaddict
Rated: E | (3.5)
i liked it but you need be more energtic when you write. you can write with passion than you will be an awesome writer one day. keep up the good work.
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Review of My World  
Review by fringeaddict
Rated: E | (5.0)
good job. i love the peom. i believe you have a talent at writing. If you would will you read my peom(s) and tell me how i can aprove on them thank you for the wouderful peom.
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Review of Marla + Marlon  
Review by fringeaddict
Rated: E | (4.0)
That is a really good poem, keep up the good work. you are very creative.
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