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Review of The Last Walden  
Review by Bullfrog
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very descriptive. Didn't notice any problems with spelling or punctuation. The thing that I think would improve it the most would be to break it up into many more paragraphs. The very long paragraphs make the content seem to run together and it's hard to concentrate on the story. Keep writing!
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Review by Bullfrog
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Very well developed story. Description of bedroom activity graphic enough to be stimulating but not overdone. Nice job!
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Review of The Skirt  
Review by Bullfrog
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Excellent writing, well developed story and ending!
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Review of The Debt  
Review by Bullfrog
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Very well developed story! Well written, good job!
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