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Review of We All Remember  
Review by mininessie
Rated: E | (2.5)
this was ok for being one of your first time with poetry where you need help is to punctuate your setences in poetry because it tells the reader to put more emotion were it is needed and it makes it easy for the read to and get the meaning out of it keep up the good work and keep on writing
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Review of Mother Nature  
Review by mininessie
Rated: E | (3.5)
this has very good visual imagary and it had good stopping and starting points only problem is that there needs to be commas whe there are the colors of flowers but over all i think is was pretty good (better than i would do) so keep up the good work and hope to see more
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