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When I review, I like to think I am your personal fitness trainer. You show me you working you, and I point out what you can improve on, and also what you are doing well on. I will review any category of writing, except Erotica or Gay/Lesbian. I prefer to review Horror, or Action/Adventure, since I feel that is my area of expertise, but I will still review any piece of work, save the two listed. If I happen to be a downer, I am very sorry, but no pain, no gain.
I'm good at...
Writing wise: Horror, Action/Adventure, some Comedy Reviewing: I review ANY type of work besides Gay/Lesbian or Erotica! (How many times can I say this?) I love seeing people improve their skills, and become a better writer. Youtube Channel I also have a youtube channel called Jedediah's Lab, so checking that out would be greatly appreciated!
Favorite Genres
Horror, Action, Adventure, Comedy
Least Favorite Genres
Erotica, Gay, Lesbian, Transgender, Poems
Public Reviews
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Review of These Apples  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Interesting piece of poetry. You have varying lengths of verses, and that makes the reader very interested. As you write your poetry, it doesn't have to rhyme. That is one of the thing I think is very interesting about this. I have seen some poets who over rhyme, and then it feels like they have come out of mother goose's nursery rhymes. Great job!

Keep it up,
Furied


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice job! You are a great writer. One of the ways to get better, is to practice. Your writing doesn't have any swearing, and that is a hard to find quality. You have done a wonderful job on this! Keep it up! Another way to add to your story is detail, and you have a lot of it. Nice work!

Have a nice day,
Furied
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A very sobering story. You have written a masterpiece, and I love it. One of the things I think you could improve on, is adding more detail. What kind of dead animal was in her bed? What is Joan like? Is she overly sympathetic to one cause? Or does she just trying to be spiteful to the main character? But, I will say you have a great storyline. It flows wonderfully. Keep it up!

Have A Nice Day,
Furied
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love it. It is greatly detailed, and feels like I can step into your life and relive this scene. It paints a picture of what you did that morning, and what happened. Since the reader has stepped into your life by great details, He or She to can feel the disappointment. That is one of the things I think is so lifelike. Great job!

Keep it up,
Furied
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Review of That's you  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very well written. I would say that not all of the last words have to rhyme, but it still is great. Having every last word rhyme makes it A tad monotonous. Other than that, It tells a great story of a love that may never be found. I would like to hear more of your poetry. You write beautifully, and your setting is amazing. Paragraphs 3 and 6 are the same, and you might want to change that up a bit.

In Closing

Keep it up! You have great skills as a poet, and the best way to get better is to keep practicing, and review other poet's work. That way you can see other ways of writing.

Keep Going Strong,
Furied


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