and yet we review others! Sometimes the pain is worth it. Maybe to give advise or enlighten the reviewee, naw more for our own delight of what was written maybe? a pondering thought that runs threw our minds as "WE" read someones work. as for the reviews them selves ? do the people actually read tehm and take them to heart? if nothing else they might get a chuckle out of them? yet for others, its a learning tool to better help in the knowledge of bettering their skills as a writer!
The delicate balance of the sun and moon. We live in a society where most people wake at dawn and head to bed at dark! For those like me, I see the Moon as inviting as the day is to others. Its mysterious phases, brightness color and the intensity power that is behind her. Nice, i enjoyed it very much!
I hate the Mall but I do understand its a Sacred Place for Kids( anyone under 21) lol. Parents know that there are dangers there at the Mall even if you think they are against the Idea of it. There needs to more places for teens to go to have fun other than the Mall!
Wow! I can see it. The Love from the Dragon to his fair maiden, who will not have her but is all ways there deep in the soul... ithink on this as we all are kind of that dragon, missing that unreachiable dream for our princess!
I love it! we are all gypsies searching for our love the one who makes us melt. our wondering toes lead us all around in search. till that one day out of the blue we find them standing there.
Gloria- Truely wonderful!! Capturing the moon as two lovers embrass. I too love the moon and her splender. Her magical power with each of our souls. Thats the passion we all seek. its kind of like the lighting before it storms the electricity in the air sends me wild!
Inspiring I don't feel alone with the thoguht about death by CANCER! it seems I take the death of my 47 year old girlfriend the same as you with Natalie at sixteen. I also will be having a short story about what WE wnt threw but its no completed yet I just started writing it about 8 pm.Thank You for writing as it gives me some idea's about mine..
just like a snap of a fingure our lives can be totally up rooted. one second we are high on life then in a blight of an eye poof gone! just things that make up our vast complex minds we have. there seems to be happiness and sorrow that we face from day to day, which we have develope a way to cope.. thank you.
the Word Hope- i know this word well. I hope daily for things/ life to get better. I feel that Hope is deep inside of us and it needs to be let out of the bag. We all need Hope to keep our Dreams alive. I wish the poem could have been longer but to each his own!
I totally understand life gives us the things we can handle at one time.
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