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Review of The Home Sampler  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hey fyn
This is an awesome poem indeed. I could not find any negative points out of it.

ABOUT THE FORM:

This poem is an ideal free verse poem. The flow of your poem is smooth. It sounds good, though there are not much rhymes. I admire your skill.

GRAMMAR AND SPELLING:

No mistake I could find. Well done. Keep it up. The punctuations are also too perfect.

THEME:
I liked the theme of your poem. The title suits it too. It reminds me of a poem, i had read in my school life. Keep it up.

RATING:
As I am really impressed with your work, I am giving it 5 stars.

SUGGESTIONS:
n/a

ABOUT ME:
I am also a formalist poet and a member of the POETIC EXPLORATION group. You can find more poems like this one, acrostic and formalist, at my portfolio. You can visit my blog http://www.ganeshindreams.blogspot.com or find my poems on facebook. My username in facebook is sharpandsage.

Best wishes.
Review from "Let's help each other grow- Closed" 


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Review of Last Hurt  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hey Ida_Matilda
This is a nice poem indeed. I could not find any negative points out of it.

ABOUT THE FORM:

This poem is simply awesome. The rhyming words make it sound good. The rhythm is a bit rough, but as it's free verse, rhythm is not that necessary. I admire your skill.

GRAMMAR AND SPELLING:

No mistake I could find. Well done. Keep it up. The punctuations are also too perfect.

THEME:

I liked the theme of your poem. It reflects
pain, losing faith and all. I nicely protrays your feelings and experiences. Well done.

RATING:
As I am really impressed with your work, I am giving it 5 stars.

SUGGESTIONS:
May be, a shorter one would have been more reader friendly.

ABOUT ME:
I am also a formalist poet and a member of the POETIC EXPLORATION group. You can find more poems like this one, acrostic and formalist, at my portfolio. You can visit my blog http://www.ganeshindreams.blogspot.com or find my poems on facebook. My username in facebook is sharpandsage.

Best wishes.
Review from "Let's help each other grow- Closed" 


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hey Tim
This is a nice poem indeed. This is your 3rd poem on bowling, i am reviewing. You are seriously a mad bowling addict. *Pthb*

ABOUT THE FORM:

You are very skilled at free verse, I can see.

GRAMMAR AND SPELLING:

No mistake I could find. Well done. Keep it up. The punctuations are also too perfect.

THEME:
Interesting. Philosophy of life blended with bowling addiction.

RATING:
As I am really impressed with your work, I am giving it 5 stars.

SUGGESTIONS:

ABOUT ME:
I am also a formalist poet and a member of the POETIC EXPLORATION group. You can find more poems like this one, acrostic and formalist, at my portfolio. You can visit my blog http://www.ganeshindreams.blogspot.com or find my poems on facebook. My username in facebook is sharpandsage.

Best wishes.
Review from "Let's help each other grow- Closed" 


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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hey Tim
This is the second poem by you, which i am reviewing . Seems you are very passionate about bowling. *Smile* I could not find any negative points out of it.

ABOUT THE FORM:

This poem is in free verse like the previous one. This is nicely written and I admire your skill.

These lines are the ones i liked the most.

"The essential journey is one of steadfast belief
And unparalled
Accomplishments..."

GRAMMAR AND SPELLING:

No mistake I could find. Well done. Keep it up. The punctuations are also too perfect.

THEME:
I liked the theme of your poem. It reflects
your insights about bowling.

RATING:
As I am really impressed with your work, I am giving it 4.5 stars.

SUGGESTIONS:
N/A

ABOUT ME:
I am also a formalist poet and a member of the POETIC EXPLORATION group. You can find more poems like this one, acrostic and formalist, at my portfolio. You can visit my blog http://www.ganeshindreams.blogspot.com or find my poems on facebook. My username in facebook is sharpandsage.

Best wishes.
Review from "Let's help each other grow- Closed" 


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In affiliation with Let's help each other grow...  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hey Tim
This is a nice poem indeed. I could not find any negative points out of it.
Bowling is a tough sport, just like human life. In both cases, luck is necessary. There are many skillful people living unhappy lives...

ABOUT THE FORM:

perfect use of free verse to show your thoughts clearly.

GRAMMAR AND SPELLING:

No mistake I could find. Well done. Keep it up. The punctuations are also too perfect.

THEME:
I liked the theme of your poem.

RATING:
As I am really impressed with your work, I am giving it 4.5 stars.

ABOUT ME:
I am also a formalist poet and a member of the POETIC EXPLORATION group. You can find more poems like this one, acrostic and formalist, at my portfolio. You can visit my blog http://www.ganeshindreams.blogspot.com or find my poems on facebook. My username in facebook is sharpandsage.

Best wishes.
Review from "Let's help each other grow- Closed" 


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Review of Passion  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hey H.C.Paye
This is a nice poem indeed. I could not find any negative points out of it.
I think you've written it for the upcoming valentine's day.

ABOUT THE FORM:

Though this is free verse, it has a nice flow of rhythms and quite good rhymes.

GRAMMAR AND SPELLING:

No mistake I could find. Well done. Keep it up. The punctuations are also too perfect.

THEME:
I liked the theme of your poem. It's something common with us, teenagers.
RATING:
As I am really impressed with your work, I am giving it 4.5 stars.

ABOUT ME:
I am also a formalist poet and a member of the POETIC EXPLORATION group. You can find more poems like this one, acrostic and formalist, at my portfolio. You can visit my blog http://www.ganeshindreams.blogspot.com or find my poems on facebook. My username in facebook is sharpandsage.

Best wishes.
Review from "Let's help each other grow- Closed" 


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Awesome again.
Last few lines are extreamly good.
No words to praise.
Keep writing.
Best wishes
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In affiliation with Let's help each other grow...  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hey Redtowrite
This is a nice poem indeed. I could not find any negative points out of it.

ABOUT THE FORM:

Extreamly good use of vers libre. I admire your skill.

GRAMMAR AND SPELLING:

No mistake I could find. Well done. Keep it up. The punctuations are also too perfect.

THEME:
I liked the theme of your poem. It's awesome. The title too.

RATING:
As I am really impressed with your work, I am giving it 4.5 stars.

ABOUT ME:
I am also a formalist poet and a member of the POETIC EXPLORATION group. You can find more poems like this one, acrostic and formalist, at my portfolio. You can visit my blog http://www.ganeshindreams.blogspot.com or find my poems on facebook. My username in facebook is sharpandsage.

Best wishes.
Review from "Let's help each other grow- Closed" 


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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hey ann
This is a nice poem indeed. I could not find any negative points out of it.
I had read another old poem by you about shadows, I think. You are an extra ordinary poet, I guess.

ABOUT THE FORM:

Not much wastage of words .I just admire your skill.

GRAMMAR AND SPELLING:

No mistake I could find. Well done. Keep it up. The punctuations are also too perfect.

THEME:
I liked the theme of your poem. It shows your feelings well.

RATING:
As I am really impressed with your work, I am giving it 4.5 stars.

ABOUT ME:
I am also a formalist poet and a member of the POETIC EXPLORATION group. You can find more poems like this one, acrostic and formalist, at my portfolio. You can visit my blog http://www.ganeshindreams.blogspot.com or find my poems on facebook. My username in facebook is sharpandsage.

Best wishes.
Review from "Let's help each other grow- Closed" 


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In affiliation with Let's help each other grow...  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hey ChuChuRocker

Is it??
To tell the truth, I was searching for some posts that would rewards me some GPs per review. I usually write reviews for GPs using templates and that's what I am doing now, but yet this is something more than usual, something well felt and expressed.


This is a masterpiece indeed.

ABOUT THE FORM:

I usually judge the skill of the poet here, but your work is something beyond that. Actually I was so lost in imagining your painful story that I couldn't notice the beauty of the words you've used. I just guess they were awesome. I remember the words were rhyming some painful tune... Just an impression of that, is all that's left with me.

GRAMMAR AND SPELLING:
Is it necessary? I think no. Should there be thousand mistakes, it is still a masterpiece. I am impressed with the courage you have shown in writing such a painful story truthfully.
Well,
No mistake I could find. Well done. Keep it up. The punctuations are also too perfect.

THEME:
Shouldn't I like the theme of your poem??

RATING:
Giving less than 5 stars to a masterpiece is indeed a sin. *Smile*

ABOUT ME:
I am also a formalist poet and a member of the POETIC EXPLORATION group. You can find more poems like this one, acrostic and formalist, at my portfolio. You can visit my blog http://www.ganeshindreams.blogspot.com or find my poems on facebook. My username in facebook is sharpandsage.

Last and not the least, what happend to your first child?
Best wishes.
Review from "Let's help each other grow- Closed" 


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Review of Rockabee  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hey Basilides
Have a nice day ahead.
I read your work today. Great work indeed. I liked the middle part very much.

Theme::
Nice theme indeed. I really liked it.Keep it up.
Plot::
Good plot. Seems a bit experimental. Could have been better with a little more attention towards the characters.
Spellings and grammar::
I found no mistakes, good job.
Form::
Applicable only for formalist poetry.
Suggestions::
No suggestions here. This work itself is awesome.
About me::
I am a formalist poet. I like forms, rhymes, rhythms and literary labelled words. You can read my works at http://www.ganeshindreams.blogspot.com

i am giving it 4.5 stars.

Best wishes.
Ganesh
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Review of Blue Bird  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Mr. Jones
Nice Poem... My little sis liked it very much.
A very good poem for children.
But I think there is some hidden meaning and thoughts behind this work. I would be glad if you explain it in reply.
I am giving it 4 stars.
thank you
Best Wishes.
Have a nice day
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hey Snow
This is a nice poem indeed. I could not find any negative points out of it. You are always too good at prompt#3.

ABOUT THE FORM:

This poem follows the given form nicely. It is really hard to write such a poem in acrostic form. I had tried but with exams hanging over my head I could not complete it in time. I do admire your skill.

GRAMMAR AND SPELLING:

No mistake I could find. Well done. Keep it up. The punctuations are also too perfect.

THEME:
I liked the theme of your poem. It gave me a nice scope to imagine. It follows the prompt well.

RATING:
As I am really impressed with your work, I am giving it 5 stars. :)

ABOUT ME:

Well, you know me before. So no need to introduce myself here. You can visit my blog http://www.ganeshindreams.blogspot.com .


Best wishes.
Review from "Let's help each other grow- Closed" 
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Review of New year wishes  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hey ananya
This is ganesh again. Nice attempt to mono-rhyme but year and care are not perfect rhymes. 'year' and 'here' rhyme and 'air' rhymes with 'care'. I found a simple thing that would make your poem more meaningful and grammatically correct. Use 'would' in place of 'will' from 2nd line and onwards. Give an eye to punctuations.

I am giving it 4 stars.
Nice poem.
Well done.
You are indeed improving your skills.
BEST WISHES.

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Well done.
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Review of my world  
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Hey Marcie
This is a nice poem indeed. You have taken a very good theme to write the poem. The poem is short, interesting and well rhymed. These are the positive points of your poem. But still there are silly mistakes. It seems like you have typed the poem in a sleepy mood. There are many simple spelling mistakes like 'shell' which oughta be 'shall', 'Ill' which should be 'I'll', 'there lighting' should be 'they're lighting' and so on.

And one other thing makes it a bit childish. That thing is each verse of your poem is conveying the same thought.

But as a newbie you have done too well. Keep it up and keep writing.

For more poems you can visit my portfolio.
I am a member of the POETIC EXPLORATION group.

BEST WISHES.

Review from "Let's help each other grow- Closed" 
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Review of Jhansi ki Rani  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Ananya

I liked the theme of your poem a lot and also the pride to bear the glory of our nation in your heart. Really Rani Laxmi Bai was one of the bravest ladies India has ever seen. Your effort to preach her tale across the world is admirable.

Now coming to your poetry, I do feel that your effort is too good, but still it lacks many aspects of a perfect poem. I know you are a newbie here and you will be learning from others soon. Let me tell you my views.

1. First of all, make sure that what you write is correct with respect to the grammar rules. For example, you have written 'didn't dried' which ought to be 'did'nt dry'.

2. I felt this piece too childish. You may be a child, so am I. But a good poem must sound good when read aloud. You have tried to rhyme and you have done it, but just rhyming like this is not enough. I am a member of the poetic exploration group and I am a bit experienced in case of rhyming and formalist poetry. You can check any poem from my portfolio to have a good view on rhyming poetry.

3. Making poems shorter attracts readers. Do not try to write long verses. Better divide your poem in well defined stanzas with fixed number of lines if you are writing a rhyming one. If you choose free verse, then you are free.

For more help you can visit my blog at http://www.ganeshindreams.blogspot.com

You can also find me on facebook as 'Sonneteer Gns P'.

Best wishes.

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Review of Tides  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Poet72
I liked your palindrome. A nice combination of meaningful words. Tides, waves, sea, time and nature... I love these words. That's why I like your poem, nothing else is much wonderful than that. Have a nice day. Best wishes.
GANESH
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi cside
I was to review your short story which you have posted in the reviewers forum. But you had not given the link properly. You should visit the wml help page to learn using bitem and ritem links. The format is
 Invalid Item 
This item number is not valid.
# by Not Available.
. The curly brackets are necessary and bitem must be written in lower case. No 'space' must be used. For example if i replace ####### with 1823219 and write in that format then it would look like the following in the message.
"Invalid Item" 

well, I enjoyed your poem a lot. The ending is awesome. The flow of the poem is OK. It could have been better if it was a shorter one. I am quite partial with rhymes and forms. I found this poem lacks rhyming words. But it does not matter as free verse suits this poem so well. After all it is not the words but the emotions, that determines the weight of a poem. Your poem is rich with emotions. Keep it up. Keep writing. Best wishes.
GANESH
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Review of The Phoenix  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Smith
This is a really good and inspiring poem. I liked the flow of thoughts. I recomend you to read a poem by me, 'REBIRTH OF THE PHOENIX' from my portfolio. As i have forgotten the id, i am unable to use bitem link now. I will be sending the link in another email. Well i liked the following lines of your poem the most. These lines give true inspiration and summerize the poem.

'I hear mocking words
Yet I forget them
And I trudge on.
For every stab at my heart,
My spirit grows stronger and stronger.
Soon I will fight back,
Soon I will avenge,
Soon I will burst forth
From the flames
Alive and furious
My eyes will speak a different tale then
And my spirit once again will arise
Just as The Phoenix Bird'

I am giving it 5 stars.
Keep it up. Have a nice day. Best wishes.
GANESH
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Review of Broken  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi strokecity
The ending lines of this poem are awesome. I liked the lines
'I don't know
How you live with yourself,
How you dare to justify
yourself.
But
You do.
I'm broken...by you.'
Nice lines indeed. These lines summerize the whole poem very effectively. Great job. Keep it up. Have a nice day. Best wishes.
GANESH
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Brandy,
I am reviewing not the poem you have submitted but the 1st one, i.e. the tanka poem on flamingoes.

This poems seems to be a highly symbolic one. Gives an feeling of nostalgia. Nice job done. The line I liked the most is the last one " rescued, fed, but lacking warmth."
keep it up.
Best wishes.
GANESH
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi WhoMe
This poem of yours gives an impression of your philosophical way of thinking. It reminded me of Robert Frost's famous lines
" The woods are lovely, dark and deep,
But I have promises to keep
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep."

Really inspiring lines are these and yours too. Keep it up. I am giving it five stars. Best wishes and have a nice day.
GANESH
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Review of Writing in Snow  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi Snow
This is a very nice poem indeed. But why have you rated it 18+? It gives an nice idea about your daily life. I think everyone should write a 'to do list' everyday, though i ,myself, never write one.
Best wishes.
Have a nice day.
GANESH
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Review of BEHIND THE CHARM  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
you write wonders. My deepest respects. GANESH.
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Review of The Promise  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very well done Dykie. I enjoyed your poem a lot. Especially the last four lines and the twist in the last part of your poem created a good impression of the theme inside me. This poem is really a good one and the theme also is too creative. But still there are many improvements to be done. You have tried very well to use rhyming verses. But you should have used perfectly rhyming words. For example you have used 'turned and return', 'waits and hesitate' pairs to rhyme. But these are not rhyming well. So next time you should give a little more attention to use proper rhyming words. And this will make your poem sound better and very enjoyable to read aloud.
Best wishes. Have a nice day.
GANESH
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