Oh my. You wrote this for your wife? I have to say I am intensely jealous. This is absolutely beautiful, and I mean that in terms of style as well as ideas.
Now I personally am only agnostic, but this is such a wonderful portrayal of an all loving, all accepting being. The image of inanimate objects almost leaning forward to look is gorgeous as well, and the description of building someone out of clay is so warm. As I assume you intended, your wife comes off as an almost radiant being, and you come off as, if not perhaps the most externally good-looking person (which by the by, I think must be slightly harsh on yourself), internally quite stunning. The description of how words would be used seems quite apt considering how lovely this whole thing is.
I'm really slightly lost for words. I would normally go on to my critical part, but I'm finding it difficult. The writing is spot on, the atmosphere is so warm and loving, and the actual content is, as I have said already, incredibly beautiful. I can only congratulate you on that.
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