I'm no master poet, but this is pretty beautiful; nicely thought out, and an admirable commentary on human life and emotion. I'm sad that I lack the ability to make things like this up, but I can try my hardest, dang it.
Anyway, I'm sure that your girlfriend would love this.
I find it extremely unfair that Interactive Stories are the only ones that are limited by membership. All others are limited only by how many items one has in their portfolio, and I wouldn't be so annoyed if the limited number of interactives was fair, but no; only 5 for basic members, 10 for upgraded, etc.
I don't know why such unfair restrictions have been placed upon interactive stories specifically, but I very much wish to see such constraints at least toned down to more fair parameters. I paid for a full year of basic membership just to be able to do interactive stories again, but I'm not allowed to because I'm only permitted 5 interactives maximum.
Hm... Quite unfortunate that this story hasn't received a single addition from anyone on this site since its creation :/ I understand how frustrating that can be. However, I might have an idea as to why; You've set this story up with a very specific guideline; that Kagura has to be the reason behind any diapering in the story.
I think that if you open it up more, so that Kagome, Sango, and hell, even other female Inuyasha characters, can be diapered/regressed/babied/etc by/for any reason the reader chooses, it may attract some more attention. See, if you're doing an interactive, you want to limit the story possibilities as little as possible. Your guidelines listed are perfectly fine, but limiting the story, esp the very beginning of the story, in this manner can turn some people away.
Sorry, but is the weight gain part really that necessary? No offense, but the idea of a Naruto x Kushina story like this is fine on its own. Throwing the whole weight gain thing in kind of bogs it down :/ If you're into that, that's fine, but it seems like something that should be an optional path for this story, rather than the main focus.
Straightforward sexuality ^___^ Finally, someone who gets that's how these harem interactives should work XP.
Seriously, though, I'm looking to add a few chapters to this, because I'm pretty interested in doing a little something-something with a harem work that isn't deluded with dumb foot and vore fetish stuff.
This is quite the unique story idea you have here. Most people would just be blunt, direct, and straight to the point, but the very idea has a sense of creativity and flow in execution that I don't think a lot of people can really pull off. Quite enjoy the plant theme, and from what I've seen so far, no phytophilia (Sexual fetish of plants) at all XD.
^^; wow, I'm really not used to seeing so much detail put into an interactive. That's not a bad thing at all; usually, people are so lazy, and give us too little to work with, or put in too much, and bar everyone from... well, everything. But here, you got something awesome going ^_^
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