Wowww! This poem is on a high level of knowledge and writing skills!! It's great! I feel speechless... The moral is beautiful and it certainly rhymes! I love it! It is one of the highest poems in level! That's why this poem can't be valued with a number of stars, it's much more than that! 5 stars now: you deserve it! Keep up your fabulous amazing work, and you're the winner! Tc, bye!
This poem is a great one! But I think, instead of :
"Dream of me
And I'll dream of you
For my sweet, sweet Angel!
I Love You....",
it should've ended that way:
"Dream of me
And I'll pray for you
And let the love reign
On me and you..."
But it's great though! Keep it up! Tc...
Wow! What a beautiful story!! ;) I love the ending and how it's related to the death and the beginning as you started staring at the stars in the sky! I like a lot the ending sentence that just leaves you wondering and thinking... It's really smart! You're a very good story writer! It's like I'm reading for a really famous writer! What a style! Love it! Learned so much from this story! Good for you!! Keep it up! ;) bye tc...
Heyyyyy... I love the title very much! It's really creative and it pulls you to read the rest of the poem! I like the way it's related to the poem's theme! Great Work!
I love this poem! Johnson man you're really talented! Keep it up!! The ending is great and everything else in the poem is worth reading it! I enjoyed every minute and I'm happy! Thank you for that! Bye!Tc
I love the positive attitude you have about Death! Well, to tell you the truth, I have the same feeling!
It's a great piece of your mind!
I love the way you expressed your feelings! It's like a will of yours!
Great!
Keep it up but watch out for your spelling mistakes buddy! Such as: "whan": it should be written "when" and opinions with one "p"... OK? bye!! take care! And keep it up!!
Regards,
Genius.robot (WordsInBlack).
I love the poem so much! And the message that you want to deliver!
You expressed your feelings in a great way!
But you have to watch out for the mistakes such as the word: "though" here it should be: "through" (if you mean between your hair/in your veins, then this is the word you are looking for).
And "Despretly" in the last line should be written like that: "Desperately".
Ok bye!! Keep it up!
tc
This is the greatest poem I've ever read!!
It's great: from it's meaning to the expressions to subject!! I love it all!
Good Work!! Keep it up!
I love that you kept the word Muse to the last!
And I approve every word I read... It's awesome!
You deserve those 5 stars...
Regards,
Genius.robot (WordsInBlack).
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