I reallly love this story. It has all the elements of horror that I hold important. A good leading, the build up in suspense, the rotagonist seemingly trapped with no way of escape. I love the psychological twists here. The number '13' does give some folks the creeps. A truly excellent story. Would love to read some of your other work.
I loved the story because some of mirrors my discovering my own transgnderism. This could be a great novel or even a play. Perhaps you could expound specifically on a few of the dark times and your feling at that precise moment.
Gennee
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