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Rated: E | (4.0)
Haha.

I really did laugh when I read this. And it's astonishingly short, just as you promised.
I like how in the beginning it seems serious, but ends on a light note.
The "A billion hearts" part is unclear though-- it seems unrelated. What do you mean
by "A billion hearts?" A billion hearts of what? Of whom?

The "woe is me" is understandable-- it is a result of the fart. But woe to the billion hearts? Why?
It just seems random, unexplained.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow!
This was funny, creative and informative. Although I must admit I am guilty of some of these from time to time...
Great work!
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