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Review by Benjamin Cabrera
Rated: E | (3.0)
I completely understanding what your point is and will I was reading this it was really quite beautiful. I could definitely relate to your general idea of contemplating over your love. But I think you used too many commas in places where commas were not warranted. I think you could work on your descriptive skills and your grammar.
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