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Review of Until I Met You  
Review by Mamma Ray
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is another great poem.
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Review of Waters  
Review by Mamma Ray
Rated: E | (5.0)
Awsome. Keep up the great work.

God Bless
Rayleigha
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Review by Mamma Ray
Rated: E | (5.0)
Awsome poem. I occationally write sermons. I like to deliver them to young kids. I once had a bible study were i used to live and i would preach once a week to the kids in the neighborhood. Well keep up the good work and writing.

God Bless
Rayleigha
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Review of Heavens Gift  
Review by Mamma Ray
Rated: E | (5.0)
Awsome. Keep up the wonderful writing.

God Bless
Rayleigha
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Review of Animal Spirit  
Review by Mamma Ray
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a great poem. i like the personafication. Sorrry for the misspelling. Keep up the great writing.

God Bless
Rayleigha
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Review of Peace  
Review by Mamma Ray
Rated: E | (5.0)
That is very true.

God Bless
Rayleigha
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Review of Lighthouse  
Review by Mamma Ray
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a great poem. Keep up the good work.

God BLess
Rayleigha
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Review of Dead  
Review by Mamma Ray
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a great poem. Keep up the good work.

God Bless
Rayleigha
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Review of Blue Stain  
Review by Mamma Ray
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a wonderful poem. Keep up the good work.

God BLess
Rayleigha
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Review of Praise  
Review by Mamma Ray
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love it. Thanks for letting me read it. It is wonderful.

God Bless
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Review of New Blood  
Review by Mamma Ray
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
this is an unique poem. Keep up the good writing.

god Bless
Rayleigha
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Review by Mamma Ray
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a really good poem and it could be lengthened a bit. your a great writer keep it up.

God Bless
Rayleigha
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Review of Fireside Story  
Review by Mamma Ray
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
It is a good story but at the end it got boring. a few suggestions if i may, it has a good idea to it but if you extended it a bit and may be as a ghost he catch up with paul bunyan or lewis and clark or something like that you may be able to turn it into a book. just a suggestion you dont have to use them.

god bless
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Review by Mamma Ray
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
i thought this poem was just splendid.
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Review by Mamma Ray
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I think this is an awsome poem and me being a chistian i find my self judging and not knowing and i bet there are alot out there who do so it is good to know someone else notices. so keep up the good work.

god bless
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Review by Mamma Ray
Rated: E | (5.0)
thats an awsome poems and i hope you had or are having a good childhood.

god bless
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Review by Mamma Ray
Rated: E | (4.5)
this is a great poem i kindof the same way with a guy i think i love who i cant have cause his age but we dont really fight we kind of play argue but something draws me to him. keep up the good work


god bless
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Review of A Recipe For Love  
Review by Mamma Ray
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really love this poem and if i could i would rate it a 6 or 7. keep up the good work


god bless
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Review by Mamma Ray
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a great poem and as a christian myself i am glad you found the lord and i pray that he blesses the rest of your life. keep up the good work.



god bless
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Review by Mamma Ray
Rated: E | (4.5)
this is a good poem about a strang topic. keep up the good work



god bless
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Review of Perfect Love  
Review by Mamma Ray
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a great poem. good job and keep up the good work.


god bless
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Review of christ passion  
Review by Mamma Ray
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this poem. it showa the love you have for the lord almighty. As a christian i am glad that god gave you the ability to witness to those who do not know him as there shepard.

hey i saw you were in the armed forces, which branch
i plan on becoming a chaplain eventually in the army.

good job and keep up the good work

god bless
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Review of Dear Daddy  
Review by Mamma Ray
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is a sweat poem. it is cute and it makes total since of a battered child wanting to be with his father in heaven



god bless
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Review by Mamma Ray
Rated: E | (5.0)
this is an awsome poem. it shows the love you have for that special someone.


god bless
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Review of America stands  
Review by Mamma Ray
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hey how is ireland? I have always wanted to go to scotland cause that is were my ansesters are from.


this is a great poem and the last two verses you should add. and advice you should try to get a couple more countrys in there. at the end you could put

IDEA:instead of the world falls

The world unites
with hand in hand
as long as there is love we will stand


God bless
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