Your poem is outstanding and very special. This is the "once in a blue moon" I'd say, sparked my day. This is very inspirational for my life as an individual. True love, you are in love. No more or less for me to say. Words speak itself. So about the pattern of it and all, here I go. Rythm is very very catchy. Went to a flow. Rhyme got excellent for me. This is once again my view regarding this. And grammatically I didn't find a mistake, I couldn't notice. Impact of this poem for me, is this is love. Stop lying and let it out. If she's the one who got to show you how big this world is, she's the one that deserves your truth and embrace the love with you. Again, my view. Excellent job. Hope to see more of your poems.
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