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Review of The Room  
Review by WritingInMotion
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Short, sweet and full of emotion. It was almost if the scene with him alone was more of reality than the one of his wife in the hospital.

Keep at it, this was beautiful
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Review of Peaceful Night  
Review by WritingInMotion
Rated: E | (4.0)
I liked it, but it seemed a little redundant at the end. But as it stands I liked it. Keep up the writing!
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Review of Moves On Anyway  
Review by WritingInMotion
Rated: E | (4.0)
I like it, but I feel it could be fleshed out more, the last lines leave me hanging. "They heal and move on" but the scars leave a mark, something left with us, a reminder of a past experience, good or bad. Just a thought :)
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Review of mad for death  
Review by WritingInMotion
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Minor editing needed but overall a solid work. Keep at it
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Review of I Wish  
Review by WritingInMotion
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
I think you capture the mind of the situation but I think there is something missing. I feel, but I don't get that pit in my stomach. It seems like there should be more desperation. The poem almost seems like there is a sense of hopelessness in it, but it's not fully fulfilled. Overall solid though.
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Review of Desolate  
Review by WritingInMotion
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Interesting. I'd like to see it fleshed out more, but definitely a good piece. Keep it up.

The premise seems simple enough, although with all the apocalypse type stories, TV shows/Movies out there this one seems to have a bit of promise to it. I like the name Trace, and I'm interested to see where he's headed
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Review of Snow  
Review by WritingInMotion
Rated: E | (4.0)
Short, sweet, worth a smile
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