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Review by YugiohPKMN
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
>makes a point that Alden doesn’t know Saix’s name
>types Saix’s name anyway
Doh, I missed! That’s a real big continuity f***up right there, mate. And on the same goddamn chapter too….that’s something a professional, proper writer would fix by double-checking their work before publishing, or at least hire a proof reader to double check it for them.
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