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Review of Longing  
Review by calimurpy
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
I always wanted my lover to be my best friend. So far, this has eluded me. I really liked the flow. I laughed at (she could seriously imagine the coroner bringing her dead body to the house and her dad yelling at them because they brought it after curfew). That was funny. I love sarcasm where some people don't. I think that sarcasm is much better in writing than spoken. Some people just don't get it. They are very literal {like Bones on Bones). I especially like how you brought the relationship to life. I could feel the characters. I think that is 3/4 of the battle. Good job.
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