Dear Author,
What a great idea! I have written and lot and read a lot, and this is honestly one of the greatest ideas I have ever seen. You are truly talented. Keep writing!
Zach, that was a really good chapter, and I absolutely love how you write both points of view of the two characters. Where are the other chapters? I'd like to read them. I enjoy how specific you are, and you're quite descriptive. Just one thing, be careful of your grammar. I noticed a few minor errors, but that didn't stop me from enjoying your chapter!
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