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Review by Ajnabi
Rated: E | (4.5)
Ann,

This is very well written. It has been thought out, with proper rhythem and rhyme. This poems brings as much to the casual reader as it does to those who are in mourning for the dead, and that is truely something to be proud of. The only real thing that sticks out to me as incomplete is the final 'R' in Year, which you have put as 'Readers.' Although I cannot think of another word off the top of my head, I really think that a better word could end the poem on a much more thematic note. Other then that I really think you have done an excellent job.

Keep Writing!

-Ajnabi
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