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Review by Ajg
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Well to say the least it is a overall good story it has great plot and i like the beginning how it tells what happened of how he shrunk and not just " I'm the avatar i shrank you."
to be points of improvement ide say you should have scenes where she brings in others like Asami or maybe Ikki to who might like that that way it gets more interesting and opens up plenty of new ideas. Don't get me wrong i understand the main part must stick to Korra but you should try to leave that door open and see what others would like to
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