It is a nice story. The plot is interesting and will make a person want to keep on reading to know how the story ends. The best part of the story is that it talks about qualities such as goodness, kindness, and may inspire a person to help those who need help and are in a difficult position in life. Keep writing. You can also review Item # 2076955.
The idea and story are interesting.The story is full of suspense right from the beginning of the story and you have managed to retain the suspense till the end. Have you written this detective story for some school or college project? Or do you like writing detective fiction as a hobby? Have you written any other short stories as well? Please do tell me. But this story is interesting and I would like to read part 2. Keep writing.
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