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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This was absolutely brilliant. It had me captured from beginning to end.

The intricate descriptives and the vivid imagery you painted was just wonderful e.g. "clatter as they scatter in the wind recoiling from the path"

The poetic devices that were used were great: "Outside the grey-grit city yawns"

Story development was very good, it seemed that you were describing a pair of lost drug users...forgive me if I'm wrong.
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