feels sad when you fall in love with a person you can never be with or you can never find the courage to tell the person.The poem is a nice one.it brings out the life of a person desperate for love.a person who is so much in love but can never get the chance or courage to express his feeling.
The story is nice and interesting and the author has realy composed his story nicely.I like how the story starts and the character of Mrs Taylor.She seems tough and not a very good land lord.The language is interesting and well arranged.I also like the character of his father who even sends him his childhood belongings and also how his father has been undermining him ever since he was young.The gambling problem ha!That is a nice lie to escape a problem that could have been big because his parents would have thought he is insane.
The suspense of the story is good.I still would have liked to know what the buzzing sound was all about.Maybe the guy was insane or something or maybe there was a ghostly figure behind the sound.
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