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Rated: E | (4.0)
BEAUTIFUL THEME and BACKSTORY! However, I believe you should try to correct your grammar. Also, the lines can get a little choppy. When, your writing your next poem, think smooth! By the way, I am new here so don't take my comments as offensive or serious. I could use some pointers myself !
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