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Review of Like an Angel  
Review by Jipushi Hotaru
Rated: E | (4.5)
wow, it was beautifully written, there was just one small error that keeps this item from being perfect.

"I mist of evaporation is coloure" I am guessing thae
you mean "The" mist of..." If you correct that then this item will be flawless.

thank you and keep writing
Hotaru
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