Number Six:
You constantly coin Sponge Bobisms so now your friends have dubbed you ‘Sponge Bob Clever Pants”.
yeah, coffee on my computer screen, BIG laugh - thanks.
But seriously - I have a friend who is a pediatric OT, and she tells me a large portion of Autistic children
are Spone Bob Fanatics, to the point where they will correct a misquote or get mad if something isn't portayed correctly.
But this list is funny and I can almost see it happening. Great piece of humor.
Mark R
iammark301
Im over the top into 5.0 land becasue you credited the source, and added links. Exceptionaly cool
Ok, this is a good rant. It has a lot to say, and makes the point pretty well.
It does seem to slip back and forth in rythem, and almost go from lyrics back to prose/poetry.
I felt like I was on a four-wheel-drive outing on a sled with no shocks.
But the emotion and story are extremely raw and strong. I wish I could offer suggestions for a tempo,
but it would really have to come from the one feeling the words.
good luck, and thanks for the read - it was intereting
Mark R
iammark301
You need to write lyrics.
You're very talented at drawing a line, and decscribing it in a unique way. Not many ever achieve
the vision of seeing emotions and events as words, or feeling the words and phrases as you see them. I'm stunned by this work. I cannot wait to go sniff around your port.
Really "I slip the boundries from day to day" - just brilliant. I love that line.
(just one typo I found. First line of IN MARRIAGE point #1 "your really" should be "you really")
MORE FUNNY STUFF!! this is easy to read, and stated like a courtroom brief (I think?). Way to put things together.
Wish I had a few do-overs.
Mark R
iammark301
The tongue in cheek writing is well suited to the "I'm dealing with it" attitude of the text. I find no need for editing, the content is solid. I am drawn to the
insightful use of the funny bone to describe what you experience. This must be awful. Think it is time to stop making the bed?
Adding an explaination to this Acrostic was a great idea. The Acrostic itself is a great blend of the tennis and pain, as a tribute to the sport, and your feelings for it. Of course, I am so very sorry for the T.O.S. I hope your support network is strong, and may your bad days be few and far between.
I did not fillout your survey, as it is not for me.
I will however commend your insightful and quizative poll. It offers the ability to submit annonymously, allowing even those not comfotable sharing, a chance to participate. I would only hope that the information, once given is put towards a useful purpose.
Easy to understand, comprehensive, and has a disclaimer for the protection of the participants.
Very well done, a good example for others.
Mark R
iammark301
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