That is awesome man. Just hilarious. This is in good form, good rhythm, great rhyme. You clearly have an understanding of poetry weather you really do like it or not lol. I enjoyed reading this, I thought it to be a great little critique/satire on poetry, just a reminder not to take ourselves too seriously maybe? Keep writting man, love it!
That poem really chokes me up. Having lived and loved a girl who dealt with like problems I know the frustration that is there. You picked a very good metaphore for such an emotion. I have often thought about what it must be like, it is not easy to explain to people as I am sure you know, but I think you did a very effective job here. Keep writting, and living, and smiling.
This is very well written. I love the imagery you are using here. Very consistant rhyme scheme and good form throughout. What's the motivation for this though. That much I can't figure out, but then again that's not always important. None the less, good job and definatly keep writting!
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I like the message you're giving. It's always nice to see someone devoted to something. As far as the poem goes; the stucture is a little off, the rhyme scheme doesn't flow all the way through. Keep writting though, it only gets better!
Not bad...not bad. It seems a little forced to be honest. That aside, I like the theme. Dark, dreery, but as is always the way with angst; a bit of hope thrown in the end.
Wow. I'm impressed. I don't really know what to say. This poem is akin to some of my own with a slightly more positive ending lol. I love the repition. even though I may not understand the source; I love the metaphor of the angel, the wind. I'm sure this is about someone, tho things and events can easily be confused with people when it comes to poetry. I'll stop rambling, bottom line here is I love this poem. I think I will read the rest of your stuff.
I've never really looked at modern art through the same eyes, but listening to you describe it makes me want expensive pictures of large soup cans, bannanas, and poka-dots. =0)
Very good stuff... I like the end most. I mean I am probably mixing up the message here. But, the way you put it really gives legitimacy to a genre.
Keep writting and all that 'outro' type stuff ;)
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