Hello I stopped by with a review of Love's Unanswered Questions.
All in all I thought this poem was really good I saw a few errors I thought I would point out, but there is nothing major that I noticed just mistakes that can happen to anyone.
This line should read:
Why is is when i look at you,
Why is it when I look at you,
And in this line you forgot to caitalize your I
As soon as you leave i miss you?
As well as in this line:
Because every day i wake up
Like I said simple mistake that can happen to anyone. You have a wonderful poem here it really speaks to me.
Remember to keep writing and don't let anyone get you down.
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