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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Respect to poets. Trying to rhyme whilst still making sense is never me :D
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Review of Just a Dream  
Review by incawill
Rated: 18+ | (2.5)
To me it seemed to full of woe and no hope but maybe that's what you wanted to put across?? :D
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Review by incawill
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
I would have worded some parts of the story differently but this is probably due to my British English. Say like, an oxygen canister behind her slowly. ....... slowly behind her ... Suppose both are good :)

Was glad to read about cancer in a non doom and gloom way as it seems to be always potrayed and i suppose rightly so ....
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