First, let me say that the way that the language was arranged expressed the writer's feelings perfectly. I found the use of the word 'progressed' was used right as the word usage became more complex, as if the writer was becoming empowered in the middle of the poem.
The rise and fall of the complexity and length of each line is reminiscent of someone who is passionate about what they speak. The message is relating because of the portion that describes the doubt of others as provocative to the writer. Using one's insecurity of yourself is certainly a powerful motivator to prove them wrong. But it shouldn't be lost in the wordplay that independence is only as effective as the will of the person.
Very nice poem; it doesn't follow any rhyme scheme or meter, but that appears to have been the intent, based on the content.
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