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Review of Just Desserts  
Review by M. V. Sylvan
Rated: E | (4.0)
I enjoyed reading this poem. It was obviously very well thought out and some serious time and effort went into it. However, when I was reading the poem, it seemed like some of the rhymes were forced. There were a couple points where the language didn't feel natural or flow together just right. Yet, these were only a couple of spots in the poem. I think overall, it was a job well done.
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Review of Just A Cat  
Review by M. V. Sylvan
Rated: E | (4.5)
I enjoyed reading this poem. It looks like you put a lot of thought into the right word choice. There is a fair amount of imagery which is always a plus. The only thing that threw me off was that all of the lines rhyme but the last one. It just kind of felt awkward to me, but hey, maybe it's just me. It was still a great poem. Keep up the good work!!
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Review by M. V. Sylvan
Rated: E | (4.5)
This was pretty fun to read. I enjoyed the litterary references where you poke fun at some of the author's writing styles. The poem has a nice flow to it and for the most part, it didn't feel like there were many forced lines. Keep up the good work!!
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