I'd tried it on for size and the fit was perfect. :) How long is your day? Mine is size 14.5 hrs. Your poem made me feel grateful because I help patients at a hospital as a patient care tech. No matter how hectic or challenging, service to others gives me a strength to handle anything. your poem brought these thoughts to me.
You held my attention from "Beginning to end". your thoughts flowed in me like a river, well done. The times, places and settings all worked together giving me a feeling of being there with you during your "very busy" day. More coffee please, heavy on the caffeine. I liked the flow the most. I wish you had continued until the alarm was set that night for the next morning, How did you relax, unwind. What stood out for me was your dedication. A memorable poem I will think about when I'm at work because even though the places are different many aspects of the day are very similar. Thank you for the wonderful feelings of service.
My first review. I enjoyed your poem immensly. It made me feel happy then sad. On a personal level I am an animal and enviromental activist, very spiritual. I have witnessed first hand the wanton slaughter of gods creatures and the total destruction of his heaven on earth. I am hopeful though and there are many like myself trying to make changes. Perhaps your poem, future poem(s) could include animals and a little hope for the times to come for our children. my attention was held from beginning to end. It made me think and feel of places I'd been, both good and bad. I am an introvert of the highest degree but now after reading your poem I believe I may start writing at last, at least you've given me a "push" thank you.
I look forward to reading more of your writings.
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