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Review by Bird
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I thoroughly enjoyed the work and how it allowed me to relate to when i first found the blood of christ. If the audience is for the nonbelievers, try to apply more to their atmosphere. Attempt to relate more to being in their world with the "sex, drugs, and food" and acknowledge that you were there, that everyone is human, but how we handle our falls is what causes us to rise up stronger than we were before.
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