try making them track him and chase him in like a car pursute or somthing. or you could make them chase him ontop of buildings. or chatch him in a cafe.
I looked around and began to smile
happy to see loved ones I hadn't seen in a while
We'd all had our shares of sticks and stone
but now we dance around the foot of God's throne
this is an awsome line and story. and i like the part about gods throne.
Tommy showered first, and the big jerk used up all the hot water. I didn't care, though. My skin prickled at the icy cold stream, and I was grateful that it washed away the factory muck and the Texas dust. I scrubbed my hands special, but them stains, they was permanent . Nothin' was gonna wash 'em away. I put on a skirt and a long-sleeved, frilly blouse, just like Poppa liked, and wound my hair in a ponytail. No time for makeup. 'Sides, Poppa hated painted whores. good story but you need to change their pursonalitys a little
One of these days,
you'll wake up from this slumber.
Realisation will coast in,
leaving you in wonder.
One after the other,
these trivialities will pause.
What now is,
will soon be 'was'.
great poem keep up the good work. hopefully the more you make the more people like them
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this is great advice. everything in this article is good advice for new writers keep up the good work.
lol black friday. i love this you need a giant battle over somthing with a old lady and people everywhere. i like this story. black friday is a good holiday kinda shoping time for christmas. you can get stuff for christmas cheap on black friday keep up the good work.
it is a good story this lady doesnt know what to do with her quilt. one of her friends have cancer and so like a real lady would do she sent it to her friend thinking that it would help her fill better. this is a story that tells us what to do give other what you dont need
"I dare you!" The booming voice made me stop cold. When I started backing up, maniacal laughter filled the room. now this story kinda creeped me out this is a good scary story lol good scary story there is a such thing this atory is a creepy one but a very good one
this book is about a girl who is late for a meeting. she runs into many problems and she figures out how to get through them all. dogs chase her. her car stops working. ect..... what else is she supposed to do than ride a bike she did what needed done although she could have asked her friend for a ride
it is a good poem about the stars. it makes sense and is comforting. some people make think it scary or horrible but you look at the words you look at what they mean you have to understand it for it to make sense. if you like poems this is a good one for you to read every night out side looking up at the sky.
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