GabrielleEdenxx's (jajakeish) Reviews

GabrielleEdenxx

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#3464029

Review of The Stolen Child

Review by GabrielleEdenxx

Rated: E

| (4.5)

I saw this in the "Read a Newbie" section, and the title looked interesting.
And it very much was.
I loved how you describe the connection between the mother and child, just by the language they share.
I also enjoyed how well detailed the alien creature seemed.
Keep writing, you're very good (:

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#3463873

Review of Majesty's Offspring

Review by GabrielleEdenxx

Rated: 18+

| (4.0)

OOoooh, sounds very interesting,
I might read it if I find anytime to do so (:
It might take a while, but I'll get through the story XD
Unless I forget....
Anyways, it looks like a very intruiging (SP?) story, and I'm sure I'll enjoy it if I remember to read it (:

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#3427286

Review of Roses in Heaven

Review by GabrielleEdenxx

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Aaw, I almost cried when I read this, it's good to see you still have love for your mama.
It's so sweet and cute,
Keep writing (:
Jajakeish~

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#3424387

Review of musings of a robotic death

Review by GabrielleEdenxx

Rated: E

| (4.0)

This was a different kind of poem then what I usually see, but it's a good different.
I like how you put the definitions at the bottom, it makes it easier for me to understand the poem.
Keep on writing more poems like this, I thoroughly enjoyed it and am looking forward of more of your work (:
Jajakeish~

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#3415115

Review of A Day on the Farm

Review by GabrielleEdenxx

Rated: ASR

| (4.0)

Aww, such a funny, yet sad ending to a story.
It shows that chicken can be a clueless and heartless animal.
I like how you twisted the story.
I thoroughly enjoyed the story.
Especially their comments on when all the others died.
Keep on writing (:
Jajakeish~

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#3413282

Review of Why Don't We Talk Anymore

Review by GabrielleEdenxx

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Beautiful poem.
This actually describes what happened to me for a couple of months a while back.
My so called best friend ignored me until I spoke out to her and told her my feelings.
It reall spoke to me, keep up the good work and keep writing.
Jajakeish~

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#3410523

Review of Horizon Falling

Review by GabrielleEdenxx

Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)

Very good, keep up the good wor and write more poetry.
I thorougly enjoyed it. (:
Jajakeish~