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Review of Thoughts On Me  
Review by Jamie-leigh
Rated: E | (3.0)
I always enjoy poetry that takes advantage of absract structure. This piece has a strong conceptual structure, The idea of the illusory mirror, dream on the right and the (derogatory) reality on the right. and the tonality of the language itself changes too. I enjoyed this. I think perhaps it is a good I dea to add some sort of twist at the end like an amalgamation of both worlds, or a definitive reality that exists between the 2. This should be developed.
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