I thought the story was interesting; being man, I don't have the insight of a woman who is pregnant and has anxiety if her unborn child will be normal. If she is carrying a child who is sick; a child who will come into this planet with a very bad hand, I get the sense life here is unfair. The undertone of anxiety is very good; the word sweat with it. I think you have a diamond in the rough and with a few careful edits, the story will shine.
"I sit in that uncomfortable plastic ,fake leather lounge and l try to imagine my fate,l imagine everyone else around me." I like this.
I force my mind into thinking happy thoughts imagine all the happy things l could do with my baby ,l wondered what he/she would be like in personality .Well my little fantasy world is jolted back to reality as the receptionist called my name to go in and see the Doctor . Another very good paragraph.
Give it a good edit and get it back to me and I'll review it, if you want. Your friend: Frank
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